challenge

The Rest is Silence...

Death is a hard thing to deal with, even though it happens every day. Recently I lost a friend. The challenge is to write about death, be it the lead-up, the moment or the aftershock.

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Challengers

27 entries
  1. No Man's Land

    Author: HSAR

    The wind blew gently over the earth and the poppies danced in time. The sun shone brightly and the earth was beautiful. I sat down on the marble bench and let…

    Mar 28, 2010 · Ficly archive (2)

  2. Good Bye Dane

    Author: Shaun Rafael

    “Dane!” I saw my brother drop to the ground. I ran over to him and held him in my arms. He had been shot. A thin trail of blood streamed out of the corner of…

    Mar 25, 2010 · Ficly archive (2)

  3. Enjoy the Silence

    Author: Charlie K

    We found out on a Friday. Cancer. Four days later, you were gone. It was a shock to all of us. I held your hand and spoke to you, as you opened your eyes for…

    Mar 24, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  4. Clandestine

    Author: HSAR

    Most of the time it’s just so easy to watch through the scope as the target’s body hits the floor. Most of the time you can calmly pack up the gun, check the…

    Mar 23, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  5. Yellow

    Author: lastsyllable

    Kate wore black clothes to work so she could go straight to the funeral instead of stopping at home to change. It was cold for March, so she looped her…

    Mar 22, 2010 · Ficly archive (2)

  6. Composed

    Author: Pancake

    It started as a release; it was an escape. My mind would wander over the notes and rudimentary chords. The first few weeks were cacophony — then — as if teased…

    Mar 22, 2010 · Ficly archive (3)

  7. The Deer

    Author: Donkey Burger

    It was dark at night, and slippery as well. I was the lucky one. The deer, frozen by instinct, was standing shock still in my headlights. I couldn’t stop for…

    Mar 21, 2010 · Ficly archive

  8. Sansabelt Slacks

    Author: Paige Elizabeth

    “Who’s that guy?” My five year old son points at a photograph on the wall. It’s a photograph of my grandfather is in his army uniform, leaning against a tank…

    Mar 19, 2010 · Ficly archive (5)

  9. Regret

    Author: Horrorfan13

    I thought about you a lot the months before your death. Even dreaming about you a couple of times. It was almost as if my subconscious knew before it happened…

    Mar 19, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  10. Taking Care

    Author: Trann

    Up until the end, she was happy. She played with the kids and enjoyed her long, aimless walks in the fields. She had a real love for the outdoors and I tried…

    Mar 16, 2010 · Ficly archive (2)

  11. Two and a Half pounds

    Author: spongmunky

    Two and a half pounds, that’s the trigger pull on my revolver after I cock the hammer. Just two and a half pounds between me and nothing. One round in the…

    Mar 16, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  12. A Light Bulb for his Birthday

    Author: rawrchiteuthis

    We weren’t exactly friends. We had that tenuous friendship that only existed in empty hallways and secret notes; whispers and secrets that we told only to each…

    Mar 16, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  13. 5 and a half years on...

    Author: Rez Greetham

    Five and a half years on, and it still hurts. Someone told me at the time, I wouldn’t hurt forever. This memory always brings a smile to my face. How on earth…

    Mar 15, 2010 · Ficly archive

  14. Last Day

    Author: Raphael Bane

    A normal day of waiting for the girl next to me to shut up. My twin was secretly laughing at my pain. I stared out of the frosted window. We’d been driving…

    Mar 13, 2010 · Ficly archive

  15. The Last Point

    Author: Robert Quick

    I bore my corner of the casket with dignity, despite the sweltering Nevada heat. The ground around the open grave was broken and uneven. Our plan involved…

    Mar 12, 2010 · Ficly archive (3)

  16. Euthanasia

    Author: intoxicatedsmiLes

    It was just something that you erase from the cache of your brain. Something that you didn’t think about because it was just so-- Painful. I stood by the side…

    Mar 12, 2010 · Ficly archive (6)

  17. Forget-Me-Nots and Flames

    Author: The Third Robot

    I was sitting on our porch sipping my coffee when... it happened. My wife, as beautiful as when I first saw her, was toiling away in her garden doing what she…

    Mar 11, 2010 · Ficly archive (6)

  18. Is it music or noise?

    Author: H.S. Wift

    You always loved how I was so passionate about music. You said it made me normal, because everyone should have something they love. Your passion; writing. You…

    Mar 11, 2010 · Ficly archive (7)