challenge

Take me there

So, I've answered some challenges and decided to set one myself. I've noticed that you're all really good at setting the scene and I love to read things that really manage to take you to that place and moment, like looking at a picture from a different place and time. So here's my challenge: How good are you at describing a scene, any scene, *without* dialogue. It can include anything else; your characters, your scene, your experience...whatever you want it to include so long as it really takes the reader to that place! I'm setting a fairly long time since I have a trip and work due in in a short space of time so plenty of time to brew an idea and perfect it :) Good Luck (apologies if this is similar to other challenges!) *MULTIPLE ENTRIES ACCEPTED*

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Challengers

8 entries
  1. Skyfall

    Author: helig

    The water mutes the noises of chaos as I close my eyes and feel that unfamiliar coolness envelop me, minor 5ths playing out in my head Numbers play out in the…

    Nov 4, 2012 · Ficly archive

  2. Hero's Hall

    Author: helig

    He turned the shiny brass knob and stepped into the room. The first thing he noticed was the warm fireplace at the opposite wall of the room. It made him feel…

    Nov 4, 2012 · Ficly archive

  3. Murdered Whores

    Author: Abby (LoA)

    I stood beside the corpse of the latest victim. The morgue was cold but peaceful, gloomy but strangely tranquil. And I just stood there, staring at the little…

    Oct 31, 2012 · Ficly archive (3)

  4. A Pervasive Kind of Sickness

    Author: Robert Quick

    Winds, spurned by the white-capped mountains to the east, blew across the valley plain in hacking spasms. The long stemmed grasses of the valley’s floor…

    Oct 29, 2012 · Ficly archive

  5. Three-Ringed Heaven

    Author: 32 ^2

    Sasha, our poodle, was in heat again, the magical word puppies flew in shouts between my mother and father. I remember thinking I had just learned where…

    Oct 27, 2012 · Ficly archive (1)

  6. I wait.

    Author: cathy1993

    The continuous sound of car engines fill my head. Like white noise. I long for peace, I wish everyone would just slow down and stop rushing their life away. I…

    Oct 19, 2012 · Ficly archive (2)

  7. in an alien jungle

    Author: punpun

    above wine branches emerald leaves cyan sunlight shimmers. ------------

    Oct 18, 2012 · Ficly archive

  8. Only Natural

    Author: Riley

    Rain patters gently on the rooftops, wind following swiftly and quietly alongside. The leaves hum low in agreement as they pass, intertwining into a steady…

    Oct 18, 2012 · Ficly archive