Critique Wanted
Offended beware this satire verse I would rather be heard than a liar in hearse What purpose for words in the hands of a cynic? To gain your attention, the…
Offended beware this satire verse I would rather be heard than a liar in hearse What purpose for words in the hands of a cynic? To gain your attention, the…
Pretty lit houses; window sills; councils; how’s the city fit to itty-bitty secret keys from me!?-- He who is needy, seedy and greedy-- easy; nit-witty; greasy…
Sarcasm, My dear That’s all that was, Deer in the headlights, My dear My sweet Simple Know-it-all I could break you down Like a gingerbread house, And enjoy it…
Sarcasm, my dear. That’s all that was. Deer in the headlights, my dear. My sweet, simple, know-it-all. I could break you down like a gingerbread house, and…
Screw this! Why the hell should I be sorry? Why on Earth do I need to be sorry for who I am? I hereby regret to inform you that I am me! And I’m sorry that…
He is looking at me earnestly across the desk, and I can see in his face that he truly doesn’t realize how ridiculous he sounds when he tells me, “Just think…