The opening line.

Andrew had FINALLY come up with a half decent title for the book, now he had to come up with a story. It need to have an exciting start, he needed to grab the readers attention, something that would make them want to read on.

*_BOOM, the planet exploded_*

Maybe a bit too exciting.

Maybe he could go with something a bit more simplistic, yet intriguing.

*_In the beginning God created..._*

Maybe a bit too biblical.

Maybe he could do something different, maybe he could start at the end and work his way back.

*_and they all lived happily ever after, except for Fred, who was in prison_*

No, that was stupid. and who the hell was Fred?

Maybe the classic approach.

*_Once upon a time_*

Yeah that would be good, you can’t beat a classic, thats why everyone loves Doctor Who, It's a classic.

He had his opening line and it was a beauty. You cant beat once upon a time. Then he started at the screen. "Once upon a time what?" He muttered to himself. Clearly he had to give this whole writing thing some more thought.

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