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A Certain Point of View

Points of view are tricky things, aren't they? As _Rashomon_ and the stories it inspired demonstrate, what seems quite clear from one point of view can seem like something entirely different happened from another point of view. So let's play with that. Take a ficlet from either Ficly or the Ficlets Archive and rewrite it from a different point of view—one of the other people in the story, or some unnoticed observer. And don't take the truth of any element of the original ficlet for granted. Feel free to contradict it wildly, if it makes for a good story, and if the contradiction is _believable_ given the different points of view. Include a link to the source ficlet in a comment.

From the Ficly archive

Challengers

6 entries
  1. D Lovely

    Author: Slightnmighty

    He watched Donnie, his lithe form shifting with the talking he did with his hands as he punctuated his points with hysterical little air-diagrams in Kevin’s…

    Jan 25, 2011 · Ficly archive

  2. Yaaaaaaaaay!

    Author: bluefish

    The brontosauruses with their heavy bodies stay to the right, while the smaller, nimbler raptors keep on the left. Your raptor is the quickest, since he’s…

    Jan 8, 2011 · Ficly archive (1)

  3. Stalking Prey In The Night

    Author: ElshaHawk (LoA)

    They chose a perfect night. The moon was new and practically non-existent as 7 boys sat noisily around the fire, a beacon in the forest to all hunters that…

    Jan 3, 2011 · Ficly archive

  4. Pull to Leap

    Author: THX 0477

    I can make him do it. “No one can do that. It’s too far,” her own voice cooed, a melodious echo. I can make him do anything. Ripples of heat lapped up from…

    Jan 3, 2011 · Ficly archive (8)

  5. Probable Cause

    Author: stargazer1960

    I heard that, thought Penz as Dr. Sauvage sighed in exasperation. Now she is going to uncross her legs just to cross them again. He listened for the…

    Jan 1, 2011 · Ficly archive (2)