challenge

-Five- No, Six Senses

Nothing makes our writing better than when we put our readers in the ill-fitting shoes of our characters. By using the five senses and adding in emotion, we do just that. Let us, taste, smell, hear, see, and touch your entries. May they evoke an emotion as well. Give us a big scene or detail a small one; make us laugh or cry; make us believe, love, or hate. Use your whole body. Hurry, you have two weeks!

From the Ficly archive

Challengers

6 entries
  1. Last Embrace

    Author: TextMason

    The wind snakes through my hair, pulling my shirt with the vigor of a hungry 5-year-old. The breeze lathers me with the cold night air, sneaking fingers under…

    Jun 20, 2010 · Ficly archive

  2. The Sensuality of a Woman

    Author: Horrorfan13

    She slinked toward him like a cat stalking its prey. He was instantly in love. Her movements were fluid and she seemed to beckon to him to wreck the ship that…

    Jun 18, 2010 · Ficly archive

  3. An Ill Wind

    Author: Robert Quick

    The cool air that swept in from the sea was a refreshing change from the summer heat. It heralded the creeping fog that obscured the horizon and carried the…

    Jun 15, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)

  4. A Little Night Music

    Author: stargazer1960

    It’s quiet, too quiet. There is silence enough to hear the blood pushing through my veins, the wind rushing past my ears. The night is dark, so very dark…

    Jun 12, 2010 · Ficly archive (1)