challenge

Why Didn't You Love Her?

My lecturer was one asked by one of his old friends as to why he didn't love one of his previous partners. When he thought about it, he didn't know why he didn't but he just knew that he didn't. The question has been floating around in my mind, so here's the challenge. Make a story based around the question, "Why didn't you love him / her / it?" Make it about whatever you want. This boggled my mind for a bit so I'm putting a decent length deadline on this challenge which ends on my 21st birthday. Good luck! And I really look forward to seeing what you guys come up with.

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Challengers

12 entries
  1. The Girl in the Corner.

    Author: OpenSkies

    Why don’t you love her, the girl in the corner? She really needs your love. Watch her in silence, curled up in the corner, waiting for a sign from above. She’s…

    Apr 17, 2012 · Ficly archive (1)

  2. I don't know. Honest.

    Author: Fox amongst wolves

    “so be honest with me...” Never a good start, for any conversation. Honesty is dangerous, especially when you need to ask for it. “Why don’t you love her…

    Apr 14, 2012 · Ficly archive

  3. No Winners

    Author: Robert Quick

    I threw my coat into the closet without looking where it landed and collapsed into bed as if someone had removed all of my bones at the same time. I didn’t…

    Apr 4, 2012 · Ficly archive

  4. Pierce My Heart.

    Author: Infinity.

    They sat inside the living room. The couch a tattered mess, the material peeled away like bad paint. They sat in their usual spots, their seats permanently…

    Apr 2, 2012 · Ficly archive (2)

  5. In Love, No

    Author: Tad Winslow

    Ever since your mom passed your life’s been glassed on display you became a movie people liked to play you were my duty to protect I truly loved you in every…

    Mar 28, 2012 · Ficly archive (4)

  6. Loser

    Author: temporary.balcony

    “I can’t do it, ok! I tried and failed, leave me alone!” “You can’t say that, you only tried one time....don’t just quit. View it as practice for the next…

    Mar 25, 2012 · Ficly archive (3)

  7. It's nothing.

    Author: Breeze

    “What’s wrong, babe?” he asked. For once, he didn’t try to make a joke out of it. He didn’t try to play around. He just sounded concerned, worried. “It’s…

    Mar 25, 2012 · Ficly archive (2)

  8. Unraveling

    Author: morgEn

    It wasn’t that on Sundays he woke up too early to go jogging. Or that, sometimes when he got tired his voice cracked and it reminded her of her teenage…

    Mar 21, 2012 · Ficly archive (3)

  9. Debt Collection

    Author: Sphinx Without A Secret

    “But Dad,” the boy peered through the dark windscreen, “you never take me out anywhere.” “Well, today is special,” I replied, parking the car in the forest…

    Mar 21, 2012 · Ficly archive (4)

  10. Biceps and Triceps

    Author: soup

    I can’t connect with them. It doesn’t work like that. No, no, no. That’s like cleaning a car before you crash it. Pointless. Stupid. But this girl, this poor…

    Mar 20, 2012 · Ficly archive (4)